以及:For example, were all politicians to fully disclose every personal foible, character flaw, and detail concerning personal life, few honest politicians would ever by elected.
(5). 能用单词的地方不要用句子:Although this scenario might seem far-fetched, these sorts of concerns are being raised already at the state level.
(6). 多用单词和短语的并列,即所谓的用多个意思相近的同一种属的词来说明同一含义:For the purpose of documenting temporal, spatial events and experiences, I agree that a video record is usually more accurate and more convincing than a written record.
(7). 注意插入语的妙用:It is impossible for anyone, no matter how keen an observer and skilled a journalist, to recount ha complete and objective detail such events as the winning touchdown at the Super Bowl, a Ballanchine ballet, the Tournament of Roses Parade, or the scene at the intersection of Florence and Normandy streets during the 1992 Los Angeles riots.
(8). 词组并列式的例子列举方式:Thus they can play a vital evidentiary role in legal proceedings--such as those involving robbery, drug trafficking, police misconduct, motor vehicle violations, and even malpractice in a hospital operating room.
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(9). 举的例子可以重复使用使前后呼应:Returning to the riot example mentioned earlier, imagine relying on a video to document the financial loss to store owners, the number of police and firefighters involved, and so forth. Complete and accurate video documentation of such information would require video cameras at every street corner and in every aisle of every store.
(10). 常见的精彩表达多是高级动词的合理搭配,短语或词的三个以上的并列,倒装,非限制性定语从句以及能够代表依据话的词,如far-reaching, 等等。还要注意选用合适的形容词!
6.过度衔接的问题:还是Peter把自己的总结贴上来