1) 高分作文的标准考研英语作文若想获得高分,必须在内容和语言两个方面达到考纲的要求。从内容上来说,A节的应用文要完成既定的任务,如咨询信息、提出辞职等,B节的短文则一定要切题。对这一点,前面已做了反复陈述。从语言上来说,第一,表达要清楚,文字要连贯。语言要简洁、准确,使阅卷人能通过作文内容领会作者的意图;每个段落要根据提纲要点确定不同的段落主题句,且能清楚地表现段落所要表达的思想内容;使用过渡词语实现上下文之间在内容和结构上的衔接。第二,文章中句式要有变化,可以以介词短语开头、以非谓语动词短语开头、以形容词或副词开头等;句型要多样化,简单句、并列句、复合句、长句和短句综合使用。第三,句子结构和用词要准确。第四,文章中要有闪光点,切忌通篇语言贫乏。否则,即使内容切题、语言规范,也难以得高分。在下面的例子中,第一句话平淡无味,缺乏闪光点,第二句话为修改、润色后的句子,给人的感觉就大不一样。
例1:
Some reasons forare:
There are several possible reasons foras illustrated below:
例2:
We need love. We should offer love.
Not only do we need love, but also we should offer love to others who are in need.
例3:
The society is developing. So there are many changes.
With the development of society, many changes have taken place.
例4:
So, we can conclude that.
From the above discussion/analysis, we can draw/come to the conclusion that.
例5:
The first reason is money.
First of all, there is a lack of money.