I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.
If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would
complain to the Consumer’s Association.
I request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.
应注意:
1) 礼貌用词,不能过激。
2) 提出希望/要求,句型要多样化。
3) 反映问题集中,不要联想其他。
Ex. 1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.
Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions
on this problem.
2. 咨询信、请求信、说明信
开头:简要告知身份,表明写信原因或请求
正文:详细阐明询问、请求的具体内容、希望获得的信息。说明信应写明原因、
实情及希望对方做些什么。强调所需信息/帮助的重要性。(按要求)
结尾:表达谢意,希望得到对方回复、帮助或合作。
常用句型:
I would like to inquire about some information concerning/regarding….
I am writing in the hope that you can…
I am writing because I would like to…
Needless to say, your approval of my request will be beneficial not only to myself but