To sum up, the pros of establishing factories in the less developed countries to produce many of our products at low prices and then to have them transported back to Canada far outweigh the cons such as high transportation expenses, negative influence on the same and similar industries in Canada, and the difficulty in quality control. (“pros” and “cons” are deliberately used here to show a paraphrase of the original “advantages and disadvantages”) Hence the above opinion of mine. (The bold word and phrase in this paragraph are the ones I did not have the time to put in, for which I am still repenting now.)
Concluding comments of the writer:
(A man with grey hair finds it sort of pressing in terms of the time limit in Reading and Writing portions. God bless me that I can get 7 or more for all the four portions so that their requirements are met. Life is just this tough, eh?)
(Would you like to bring the two essays to your teacher for a possible evaluation?)